1. My mom
2. My dad
3. My mom's travels around the world (or a single interesting story from her travels)
4. First-hand experience
5.1. When did you travel?
2. How long had you been wanting to travel?
3. Where, countries wise, did you travel?
4. Where would you have liked to travel that you didn't get to?
5. What was your favorite country?
6. Why?
7. What was your most memorable city?
8. What made it like that?
9. Can you tell me more about that?
10. Did you get robbed?
11. Were you ever almost killed?
12. What animals did you see in Africa?
13. Would you go back?
14. How did you get around?
15. How long did you travel with dad?
16. Why did you split up?
17. When did you meet back with him?
18. If you could travel again would you?
19. Would you take anyone else?
20. Who did you meet on the trip?
21. Do you still keep in touch with them?
6. 1. When did you travel?
2. Did you travel with mom the whole time?
3. Where did you travel?
4. With mom?
5. What was your favorite place you traveled without mom?
7. Why?
8. What happened there?
9. Why did you meet back up with her?
10. Where and when?
7. 1. Most of the tourist attractions in Vietnam are either temple or ocean related things.
2. African safaris are designed to be dangerous, that is what makes them exciting.
3. On every safari there are basic precautions that guise stress you to follow.
4. Lots of places in the world don't have a credit card option.
5. Lots of great scuba diving spots are in Northern Africa.
8. First day of break
9. My house, or our hotel
10. I will take notes and record
1. Who is the audience and what is the purpose for this piece of writing? Consider offering a suggestion if either the audience or purpose is not clearly established.
ReplyDeleteFamily/ friends
2. What do you see as the writer’s main point in these questions?
To feel as if they were there with them
3.Which part of these questions interests you the most? Why?
The questions that ask about where they traveled and when
4. Where do you feel you would like more detail or explanation on any questions? Where do you need less?
It needed more detail on the why questions and no questions needed less detail.
5. Do you find any questions unclear, confusing, or undeveloped?
No. They were all pretty straight forward
1.Who is the audience and what is the purpose for this piece of writing? Consider offering a suggestion if either the audience or purpose is not clearly established.
ReplyDeleteAnybody who is willing to read
2.What do you see as the writer’s main point in these questions?
His mothers experiences when traveling the world
3.Which part of these questions interests you the most? Why?
The question "did you get robbed"
4.Where do you feel you would like more detail or explanation on any questions? Where do you need less?
*Combine 3 & 4 and combine 5 & 6
*combine question 7 & 8
and all the questions that just say "why"
*Instead of saying dad, say husband, because you are writing this story for an audience
5.Do you find any questions unclear, confusing, or undeveloped?
I found question 13 really confusing
and question 19 is under developed
questions 8 and 8 are also under developed. tell the reader what "that" is