Key Ingredients

1. a. A mysterious beginning
b. Alliteration
c. Very descriptive (numbers)
2. Who and When
3. Yes
4. Moldy mattress, emaciated chest, rashes and sores pocketed her skin.
5. Such a gruesome description and the hyphen.
6. Her living environment and her physical condition
7. Yes
8. It mentions children in a 'hopeless' fashion in both.
9. Yes
10. Specific date, foreshadowing, large number of firefighters.
11. No quote, multiple locations
12. The start of a forrest fire.
13. The sparks came from a grinder for a water pipe.
14. No
15. -A decade ago only $307 million was spent on fire suppression
- Last year they spent $1.37 billion
- State wildfire spending has shot up 150% in the last decade
16. The change in fire suppression
17. No